Black Poetry : Just enough Songs to Win You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jan 23, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beyonce told me to "Listen"

    so i'm willing to listen

    please tell me you're not kissing that married guy

    the thought of him fulfilling what i'm missing

    makes me want to moan "why!!!!!!!

    does he get to make you sigh"?

    eve :

    Howard, wake up …. wake up ….

    howard :

    what? ……….

    eve :

    what were you dreaming about?

    [shaking his head]

    i don’t know, I was walking down our usual route

    when I heard you shout

    eve :

    with joy?

    [Howard nods]

    filled with doubt, I looked up and saw you walking with another Eagle scout

    and he was praising your Chips Ahoys

    He had clout

    eve :

    well ….. you don’t have to pout Howard

    i’m already in love with a nice boy

    howard :

    who???

    eve :

    you silly



    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG! Such a SWEET interchange...WOW! Just shows how we can get caught up when doubt takes over our minds but its so sweet to have that special loved one reassure us that everything's alright!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up u doing it right here
     
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    i always love reading ya, howard

    flow like ya know.

    Desert Storm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your intro was intriguing Howard. And you had the same endearing quality to this piece, as we've come to know in all of them. Eve LOVES howard? :)
     
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    Hi howard
    *smiling* very lovely
    and yes, so cute..
    wonderful drop poet

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys :wave:
     
  8. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was such a lovely and sweet write.
    I like the exchange Eve and Howard has.
    Great job. I enjoyed reading it.
     
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