Quiet Poetry Lounge : just breathing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ayaatee, Oct 6, 2003.

  1. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    Fall is here
    the air
    is softly whispering
    to its few listeners
    the markings
    of the season

    The leaves
    are preparing
    to change
    watch closely...

    Its a time to slow down
    allow the breeze to flirt with
    your skin
    tickle
    your senses

    Lemonade goes good
    still
    fresh out the pitcher

    Football, soccer
    double dutch,
    hop scotch,
    freeze tag,
    hide -n- go seek

    the children are having a ball

    despite
    having homework,
    test and exams

    Fall is my kick back time,
    A time to pull out the sewing machine
    A time to snuggle up
    A time to smell

    A time to breathe
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com qiuiet flow
    welcome to da house of love
    nice scribe of warm gentle breeze
    welcome dis was pleasing happy u join us
    in unity & bond of love here ,,,,,nice work:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww..refreshing like the way you pose
    this,,,,nice
     
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    I know what ya mean! I love this time of year, oh yes. This was beautifully posed. Welcome to Destee! :wave: Nice ta have ya here.
     
  5. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    oh thank you all very much for taking the time to breathe with a newbie!!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya family so we always spend time what one
    make it to the house .....flow on & most welcome
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO DESTEE.COM!

    THANKS FOR SHARING!
    And welcome to Destee, this was just so refreshing and beautiful. What a picture you paint with your words.
    I look forward to reading more.

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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