Black Poetry : Just Breath

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Aug 1, 2007.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting to exhale was just a good movie
    until you and me came to pass
    and now its a mantra
    a pause before
    life has to get better
    i can't help feeling pain
    with trust gone now noones to blame
    but life can't go on the same
    everytime you move forward
    i jump back
    fade to black . . .
    your words to her
    calling her beautiful
    planning outings, arranging calls
    making me feel less than small
    i can't even get you to listen
    to remember who we were before
    life got busy and one child
    became two and
    for me now its over boo
    so, i run and hide and cry inside
    cringing at your touch
    waiting for you to just leave
    so i can once again
    just breath
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's unfortunate when one's mate fails to remember and appreciate the beauty you hold, both inside and out. Yes, it's time to breath again. I felt the pain in this write. Welcome back, Randee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you deeply sadly it seem one's forget what's really inside
    nice to read you again welcome back Randee
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know wat u mean..becuz i jus wanna breathe too..lol
    i was feelin this flow
    so keep doing ur thang
     
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