Black Poetry : Just Blaze

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Oct 13, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just blaze me
    roll me up and smoke me
    come get it
    it's yours
    skin against skin
    flesh against flesh
    when the lights go down
    all i can see is the sparks
    from your fingers
    as they touch my
    tender spots
    and rub my
    sensitive spots
    and caress my
    wounded spots
    just blaze me
    and grip me like
    nothing but your possession
    i have nothing but submission
    in my heart
    and in my mind
    take your time
    but don't be too gentle
    show me who my Daddy is
    grip my hair in your strong fingers
    and pull it backwards
    as you smack my soft skin
    and put your hand print on my...
    just blaze me
    come get me
    don't let me go
    squeeze me tight
    talk to me just right
    to make me wanna cry
    but even then
    don't stop
    just ride it out
    just blaze me
    get down right dirty with it
    make the sheets wet with it
    make the room funky with it
    make my mind dizzy with it
    and my eyes blurry from it
    just
    just
    blaze me
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot:
    love this...
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much Lovely.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:

    whoa, good lawd! this is a whole new side of you, true. and I think I like it. ;)
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you gempis! i think it's just a side that's always been there, but it's really starting to show its self! much love
     
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    :rolling: :hot: :jawdrop:
     
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    :eek:...well [email protected] true......I agree that this is a side of you I hhave NEVER seen:)
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblk....thank you so much for the read. i mean...i'm gonna take the jaw drop as a compliment! much love, lol!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it
    it post b4 i finish so hope ya
    didnt mine no words...
    this was tight
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flaming hot

    blaze u to perfection
    rockin u in a direction
    makin it
    workin it
    feelin it
    doing it
    in da motion
    blazin
    wit mad compassion
    can u feel da affection
    blazin
    from da bliss of such
    da smoke is cloudy
    heat riase
    wooooweeee!
    i ride , i ride
    flipin
    dippin
    hot smack
    da sparks u see
    is da blazin beast
    fulfill da treat
    as i feast
    on it
    in it
    blazin it
    sticky
    steamy
    sweaty
    now come
    da scream
    just before u

    da moans
    da head spin
    da passion
    deep within
    blazin it
    da soundz
    da bliss
    of da blaze
    in amaze
    rock n' roll
    body fold
    not missin it
    just hittin it
    eyes roll back
    toes curl
    body in a swril
    from da blaze
    da yearnin
    da burnin
    all dis turnin
    blazin it
    given fits
    inside da mix
    just blazin it ..:hot: :devil: :hot:
     
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