Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just Being With You.

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  1. PisceanStorm

    PisceanStorm Member MEMBER

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    I known that I've always loved you.
    Even before the
    Stares, glares and light conversion
    The desired touches
    Mixed with light kisses

    For once in my life
    I’m feeling
    The solace, comfort others have spoke of.
    I’m feeling the
    Love and beauty of
    Just
    Being with you

    Everything is right.
    Your warm hands touched my skin,
    Your lips touched my mouth,
    Just laying here
    Folded securely in your arm
    I have no fear or worries
    It---is---right.

    The right time
    The right move
    The right kisses.

    Was this a scribe?
    Prewritten
    Inked with the
    Hearts of love
    Signed with the
    Circles of our sphere
    Sealed with this celestial
    Bonding
    That is
    Making it right?

    Is this how paradise is
    Where birds sing
    From the spirit
    And all emotion is
    Sensitive to the heat
    From us?

    Even if this is the
    Last time I get
    To say
    What I always wanted you to hear
    I will never have no
    Regrets because
    You are the one
    Who taught me how to feel

    That made me experience that
    Deep deep warmth

    With the intention of
    Making me fully know
    What it is to be love.
    TY. :hearts1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully scribed Oh how i could have countered this...

    Ya pen script love in it's finest
     
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    Thank you $$RICH$$ for your kind words. Your pen open up a wonderful inking of universal feeling.
     
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    Thankz and likewise , I love how you ink da feeling of love
     
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