Black Poetry : just being real

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tryin ta be my man
    Oh no…
    Letting ya know
    whats on my mind
    Ya don’t know
    Hell
    ya just meet me…
    Tryin to get with me..
    Cant even go that way…
    No job
    No home
    But county jail….
    Most of all
    No rap….
    An
    A wanna be….
    Drug
    Hustling
    Thug….
    THAT’S
    A criminal…..
    Oh no
    And pull your pants up…
    Your half over a century
    Not a boy
    Be a man…
    Not in my style
    Get a car
    Stop ridin yo
    Sisters bike….
    Coz I got mine….
    Pay some bills
    take care of that little
    man ya made..
    BUT….
    You rather
    Support a woman
    out in the street
    And her five kids
    WHERE THEIR DADDY AT….
    I know you never ask…
    Just a place to lay yo head…
    But wont do for your own…
    Now what kinda shhsh is dat…
    See I din had all the fine things in life
    Cars
    Money
    Rings and furs….
    Best education
    Hard times
    And easy…
    And I still lay it
    down
    Respect for
    myself...
    see i aint on no
    paper chase...
    now
    Picture you
    Then picture me
    It aint happen..
    Move on to your next
    Victim…
    And if she wise
    She pass you by….
    Now I am not a hater
    Just real
    I got baggage cant take yours
    Clean your closet then
    Maybe we can talk…
    On second hand…
    Go be a pop to the
    Seed you planted
    He need ya more
    then her or me..
    be
    a
    M.A.N
    BE A
    M.
    A.
    N.
    JUST BE A MAN….



    A BLKANGEL THANG...
    :kiss:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i REALLY like this....creative...very tyte...
     
  3. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak-

    You worked this really well.

    The message is NEVER tired.
     
  4. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    So tru lovin dis Sistah..keep it coming!!!:hot:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    let it :roll:
    straight to the point
    feeling you on this
    Peace
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater..thanks for the read
     
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