Black Poetry : Just another night...............

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The hardest thing in the world is to love you,
    the easiest thing in the world is to hate you...
    It's 3 o'clock in the morning and you just coming home,
    another night of worrying what sl** you are with,
    another night of telling our son you was at work,
    another night of not getting any love....

    The hardest thing in the world is to love you,
    the easiest thing in the world is to hate you...
    I asked you where were you at.....
    another night of you telling me lies,
    another night of your h**s calling me,
    another night of you coming home smelling like....

    The hardest thing in the world is to love you,
    the easiest thing in the world is to love you.....
    You started to shower,
    another night of you hiding your infidelity,
    another night of you coming home with back scratches,
    another night of your false claims of love,

    The hardest thing in the world is to love you,
    the easiest thing in the world is to love you....
    You get in the bed with me....kissing me....
    another night of you telling me..apologies,
    another night of you making so-called love to me,
    another night of me taking you.....back................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ! this speaks out and meaningful
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DDDDDDAAAAAAYYYYYYYUUUM.... This is the best of ur work in my opinion. this is tyte as hell, I dont know man... this is just tooo hot. Fire, straight fire!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....this was incredible...i'm lovin' it...
     
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    WOW....this was deep.........."many" will relate

    I love the way the emotion reverses .........loving/hating
    which one is easier and harder at different times of the
    night...........it's so real

    This was alllllllllllllllllll that and then some!
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Took my breath away.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deeply honest...and written so tightly. much love
     
  9. word2poetry

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    advice

    all i heard in this poem was one night this one night that...........
    if yah man always got a bull**** excuse then drop em!!
     
  10. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys for replying.........
     
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