Black Poetry : Just another Love poem

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As our eyes are entwined
    By the twighlight of the moon
    My heart pounds with the sound
    Of a smooth jazz melody
    And as our fantasies turn into reality
    My knees weaken
    And my soul is longing
    Longing for the warmth
    Of your sensual body next to me
    But can you make me scream
    Like you do in my wet dreams
    Uhh…. I wish I could, I wish I could
    Just hold you over and over
    And over again
    Just kissing you and caressing you
    Until the day that We exist no more
    It’s like every moment I am with you
    You for fill my deepest fantasy
    And taking me into ecstasy
    See your passion alone
    Makes me stumble, trip, and fall
    Deeper and deeper into this thing
    Called love
    It’s like you come straight out of a book
    Where passion and romance
    Are its body and structure
    Mira mami, tu me corazon Te amo
    Your my heart and I love you
    and I just wanted to tell you
    That your love makes me wanna love you
    More and more and forever more.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, what a love...
    We know, a love like this don't come knocking everyday
    sweet piece poet, keep knocking...I'm reading
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty is da heart that feels all the warmth
    of true love this was surely a grand display of
    all that love offers .......super poetic scribing ....

    somebody heart gonna melt reading this here ..
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you just wish I was in love like that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you are from within only a heart of love can pose such beauty as this poem
    u did it up this time Defiantson
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich cause I think your stuff is tight too.
     
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    get ,get ,get ,just get em girlz!!!!nice peice man....suave kiko
     
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    To have a love that makes you want to love more and more, now, that is one powerful love indeed. I enjoyed this warm romantic flow poet.
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all just wanted to show another piece of me
     
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