Black Poetry : Just About

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Dec 12, 2011.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't keep looking into your eye's​
    For your love to come to me like a stance​
    I wanna add that one last chance​
    Then I'de be straddilin' the fence​

    Who's to say your simply waiting for me​
    The known place to be​
    When I look and relocate how much was this fee​
    Trying to beg you to let me be in love w/ you​
    Don't you see​

    There's no reason that I need​
    I just want understand ur sweet lips that feed​
    Let me not become afraid to be free​
    Of​
    The Dillusion that's only seed not yet a plant​
    of love to be.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Be not afraid of what is
    let thy self be free
    for one's love callin thee

    Allow self to feel da warmth
    and know ya not alone but missed
    your love floats like sweet hush

    it cost nothing just time within
    when true love awaits, wanting, loning
    for ya magical kiss of beauty
    yes come inside so the seed can blossom

    then all dillusional thoughts will be transparent
    for thy love seed bloom
     
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    Beautifully written.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Brother!