Black Poetry : Just a thought...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Sep 5, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...I am
    remembering—
    my fingertips…
    gently pressed
    against
    a mouth
    sweetly swollen
    from kisses
    sinfully stolen
    in covetous
    moments spent
    with
    a King
    who wasn’t myne
    & I
    ignored all of
    the signs...
    & didn’t even mind
    that I
    was loving
    on borrowed tyme.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. alyce

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    I do

    recognize this.....feeling....of willful ignorance.... the temporary bliss...that accompanies a stolen....kiss...

    tella troof Ms. Sunshyne!

    tight

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oooooool weeeeee!! sunshyne

    gurlie i know what u mean
    blissful passionate kiss on
    tyme not yours yet u hold
    locked lips.......:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce. thank You!... for feelin' me on this one.
    i'm not sure why this thought presented itself to me...
    but i sure as hell know where it came from... & i'ont
    wanna go back!! :)

    $$RICHNE$$. you are CONSTANTLY... love!
    thank You for your unwavering support!! :heart:
     
  5. Afridancr

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    Haaaaay GA

    In the midst of loving on 'borrowed time' (hmmm...can you actually pay it back???) does it feel as good when holidays/birthdays and special occassions roll around and you/he is left alone and feeling lonely?

    Who wants to play second fiddle?:confused:

    Now see whatcha done did GA?!!? :eek:
     
  6. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri Gurl I'm hearing ya !!!
    GA I feel ya on this one , been there done that , and is exactly that "Borrowed Tyme !!!"
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne who you fornicatin wit?!? lol just playin... you know I dig it!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    so simple yet so eloquent. Tell it sis





    One
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri. (lol) what i do?? huh?! i was just musin'...
    dats all! thanks for the read lil sis! :)

    Natasha. thank you for catchin' my vibe! you
    are appreciated!! :)

    Reas. shaddup!! see!... i can't take you no
    **** where!! (lol) glad you diggin' me, darlin! :)

    ZorbShun. thanks for takin' da tyme to stop
    by Ga gyrl! :) your presence is welcomed!!
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such sweet bitter rememberance...i'm feelin' ya on this heyah, sweet sunshyne. lovin' the flow on this piece, it's str8 to the point. always, lovin' your work, as usual. i think you know that already, ryght? ryght. :)
     
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