Black Poetry : Just a thought

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I often wonder what it
    takes to make a man love
    you so completely that you
    never doubt yourself.
    Then I wonder what it takes
    for a man to allow a woman
    to love him completely.
    Then I realize that you
    never need permission
    to love anyone completely
    or otherwise.
    Just the love in your heart
    and the thought that you
    want to love that person.
    And wether this love is returned
    or not you will have planted
    that seed to make someone
    realize how special you are.

    Love is the key to happiness
    and without it what do you have?

    Just a thought.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely put
    likes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed to the point and on target
    love is free without it there is just
    nothing to hold on ......well put poetess
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just thinking what it would be like if love was that easy, if we could just will a person into loving us. But life doesn't work that way, and neither does love. And when it does happen for 2 at the same time, it does seem magical, maybe it is. I liked this drop, gives ya something to think about.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you guys are always showing such love and insight. Thanks for reading and for all the feedback.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats a nice thought:)
     
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