Black Poetry : just a song for the family

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 14, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this da boy
    i wrote this cuz i wish i had this
    so i sing this to those who have this and need to keep this
    and those who are like me
    holla at ya


    Just a song


    About a woman
    Bout a man

    Bout a plan they
    Had

    To feel joy
    And share pain
    Love them when they wrong
    When the mood is right
    And the tempers calm

    To feel pain
    And share joy
    Love when its hurts
    When the words aren’t worth
    The dignity

    Take my heart to a plane
    When there’s no more games
    And life is my only aim
    To be consoled when the world get’s cold
    Someone to share the tears of my soul

    A little well to dip in when the air is dry
    A tear to wipe, a shoulder to cry
    I’m telling yall
    Just a friend to call at home
    A voice to be heard when u alone

    I’m talking bout a zone
    Like no other
    Love u like a mother
    Help u instead of telling u yo faults
    Someone who’s drivin, and can take walks

    Thru the valley
    And creeks
    And will go to the mountain top
    And fall down when u start to drop
    …………..




    Life After Platinum………………

    copyright: Daniel Davis 2k4
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're not looking for anything extreme, she's out there some where...sweetly posed.
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have her
    but i don't see a future
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya sometime what we have is not the future
    so we seek on til dat day come and it will come
    speak on
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin ya on dis....
    Peace Angel
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice piece....I was feelin it
     
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