Black Poetry : Just a Shot

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blkthunder, Oct 24, 2002.

  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go out at night and sit at th e bar.
    While I'm home alone thinking of you from afar
    A cold stiff drink is all you need
    to numb the pain of your heart that bleeds
    For you know the truth of where we now stand.
    In our journey together we have reached the end of the land
    I feel your pain so I reach for a drink
    To numb the pain of what my mind thinks
    But for ever i must return to the reality of my life.
    you will be missed, especially at night.:heart:
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you poet
    inside the conflicts of relationships

    DSS
     
  3. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime thingz happen and our end comes to pass
    nothing was promise nothing was told 2 last
    hearts broken
    minds on a twist
    but surely both can get through dis
    mind of realty soon clear
    mend heart comes to bare
    we move on 2 a new day
    a new love
    we both will share
    tyme will tell so hold ya head up high...
     
  5. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin it......also ...
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm going to be honest with you

    i like this but i feel it could be even better

    but hey what do i know

    good work and i hope to see more from you
     
  7. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankxx--feel you..
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one of the things that is wrong with trying to drown your troubles in alcohol, is that when you come up for air those same troubles are sitting there waiting for you....a sad situation to be in...

    K
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    too shae
     
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