Black Poetry : just a read....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coz I don’t flow like ya
    don’t mean
    I don’t understand ya…
    See I sit in my own realm
    Just like ya…
    Listen to ur story
    And din turn ta mine
    It my not be on groove or
    even have dat vibe
    But
    I got my story..…
    its just as real. …
    because you didn’t
    experience
    Don’t mean sum
    Body else didn’t…..
    Just to Uncover
    some emotions
    even letting
    Out sum stress….
    A line is just that
    a line…
    Look though the eyez
    Listen ta the words….
    Don’t read the mind..
    Youll be wrong
    Every time….
    cant feel what the whole
    deal is…

    youll have to excuse me i am at a blank
    just throw somethin out there see how it work...

    just a blkangel thang...:toast:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wordz of the open mind flowin' free
    i like dis piece it speaks a tune for me
    very nice work.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...
     
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    you know this reminds me of some post people have put up criticizing others for not writing what they think they should write. just because i may not write like you doesn't mean i don't think about problems affecting our communities and the world. peopel release stress the way they see fit. i loved this and i truly felt this and i think it was much needed
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...wasnt meanin to make a statement just written what i feel...
    ya know as i say
    my pace .....
    but thank you....for readin and i guess now this piece have a meaning lol....
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem was hella tyte........
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We be individual in our own right.....putting pen to parchment tying up words and thoughts together real tight.

    MBA...this was really profound and provoking, simple and deep at the same time.

    Thanks for your words.

    We should all appreciate and respect the person no matter what the style or content.

    We have a choice on what and who we comment on and who we read.

    Scribe on poets, for WE are special and blessed people, highly favored.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thank you..Quinessential1
    for your words....kisses
     
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