Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just a quick poem I wrote for the ladies...feel me on this...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisiteBalla, Jan 18, 2003.

  1. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    My Lovely Lady

    I need a lady
    Not a chick
    Not the type to talk quick
    And be a trip
    When the good times slip.
    I need a lady with style and grace
    Not just a cute face
    And some curves around the waist.
    I need one that makes me feel like a king would
    When I’m not doing too good.
    One that compliment's
    My style
    My profile
    A self-esteem boost
    That can't be defiled.
    Not just a physical fling
    A one night thing
    Evaporating in the morning
    When alarm clocks ring.
    I need one that's hospitable in her heart
    That love that can’t diminish
    Even when we’re apart.
    Resurging a smile
    From my frown
    When I’m feeling
    lesser than down.
    One I can gel with
    Feel swell with
    Completely unselfish
    One I can mentally relish.
    That’s what I deem a lovely lady.
    :flirt: :toast:
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was reel hot!!
    So can I feel out an application 2b yr lady?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done love dis piece here keep flowing poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope you find what you're looking for--nice write--keep flowing.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh...yes
    the concept of the
    classic "lady" is forever
    hope you find her...
    Very sweet flow!
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are a KING and there's a QUEEN just waiting in the wings for you. When she comes...you will surely know. very nice and heartfelt poem...
     
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    your lady

    this poem is great, short lesson with nice rhyming in it. keep the flow. it's much appreciated.

    - PO
     
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    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAH SWEEETIE
    THIS WAS REALLY A NICE PIECE. VERY SMOOTH AND DEFINITLY WORTH READING AND TAKE HEED INTO. DON'T GIVE SHE IS OUT THERE.
    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY TO YOU
    JAH DIVA :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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