Black Poetry : Just a post with no name!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Oct 4, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one can Move like the ocean,
    But my poetry can make u sick
    Soon My enemies would have to put snooze in motion
    before any poetry throne would fit
    Maybe a hypocrite to most,
    Because protection is my key weapon?
    Even if im banned just know their is no best post.
    Even if we switch jordans,
    My feet has modern day slavery chains on them
    The lord wont listen but im alright because i can afford them?.
    Money is good to have,
    im not suppose to ever break free
    when i keep getting spiritually stabbed because they hate me!!!!.
    I guess you gotta see the devil before you see God,
    Im still on the lower level because times is still hard.
     
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    Like being locked up
    Trying to escape
    The lies and dismay
    The painful hurt
    But something keeps
    Pulling me back
    Back I go
    Going down
    But once I reach that lower ground
    Its no where to go but up
    Like being behind bars
    No matter how far I go
    I cant run no more
    Hard I strive
    Strive hard I
    The devils there to beat my soul
    Making me fold one more time
    But now its no where to go but up
    I shall rise and them chains shall break one day
    For my faith overstands all storms....

    QQ....nice flow i likes can ya tell
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel thanks 4 the play in the flow :look: it's always a pleasure to see.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah yeah right...
    your welcome...
    it was tight
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :yesno: Like I said it was welcomed...LOL :haha:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :skillet: i ssaid your welcomed... :bully:

    :luvu:
     
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    Letting those poetic chains lose, and flowing free, yet still feeling restricted. Flow on poet.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes every poet feels like this at some time or another. thanks alot 4 your time and kind words my sister!
     
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    tight! tight! tight! flow on, brothah, wow!
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    maybe a post with no name
    but it definitely is tight..
    this breaking loose and still contained
    it is very nice all the same//
     
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