Black Poetry : Just a Pissed Off Poem prt 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by toylin, Aug 8, 2004.

  1. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What in the world is wrong
    With, not me,
    But you?
    Walking like you own
    My world
    Approaching me like you done
    Went and lost your mind
    What race am I?
    What race am I!
    What kind of question
    Is that?!
    Accept the fact that
    I am Black
    A Woman, all Natural
    Get the skepticism off
    Your face
    What in the hell didja
    Think I was?
    Ask my biological creators
    If you don't believe me
    My mama, she Black
    My daddy, he Black
    My sister, she Black, too
    I guess that would make me -
    Surprise! Black!
    (And you's a ig'nant
    Mo'fo if ya didn't know that!)
    I know you dig it;
    If you don't, who cares?
    Certainly not me
    What you lookin'
    Like that for?
    Callin' yo'self mad at me
    Don't want the answer
    Keep the question out your mouth
    What's it gonna take
    For, not me,
    But you
    To understand?
    I am proud of what,
    And who,
    I am.
    Now you wanna walk away
    Gotcha feelings hurt, huh?
    I am Black
    A Woman, all Natural
    I know you dig it;
    Need I say more?
     
  2. MrBlak

    MrBlak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice continuation from the first part. I think they are both great pieces.
     
  3. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much, kind sir. There's plenty more where that came from!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight scribe flow head on....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look at u wow sistah Queen ya pen hot i see
    flow on wow!!!
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep droppin these pissed off poems.. cuz they help make my day
     
  7. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL! I'll try.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok who is pissing off my sis??
    SHE IS A 100% BLACK WOMAN!
    Nuff Said!
     
  9. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Easier said than believed for some people apparently. But thanks for you support!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista bump those who would love to make you "too light to be right" lol shoooo smh you betta tell em to stop smh cause part 3 might end up wif dem catchin a whoopin *giggles* :) oh and when you ready sista...you can come into voice chat and we can talk bout how we gon get you to read this LIVE ON THE MIC :wink:
     
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