Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Jan 26, 2005.
Well, it has been a while since we've read a piece from you, but then, you usually wait a while between dropping pieces. So many different poetic flavors to behold, something to quench everyone's thrist. Toes can be stepped on, yes, accidently, on purpose, accidently on purpose. Much about the written word can be left up to interpretation, we are at a disadvantage in that way, as compared to a conversation that is face to face.
This was a well written piece, all of your pieces I've read are. But there seems to be much discontent here. What's the problem poet? Or could this actually be a happy piece, and I am simply reading you wrong?
Aaaaaaaahhh yes, my soul has been fed!!!!!!!!!!!!
Putting on my critique suit *clearing my throat*....(and it's 3,2, 1...aaaaand action)
We are live here at Destee.com where one of the most
Prolific writers of all times has just ripped the front page
with a spoken word joynt that has left the crowd
frenzied in a state of elation and
...screaming for more...more...more...
(we will definitely need more security...)
The performance was...albiet an artistic presentation
that showcased the voice of a queen that is as Vivid, Bold and Sassy
as many of her other works have earned their reputation for being...
If you have not drank of the waters that is Triniti...the mixed melody
of Consciousness, Wisdom and Quick Wit, then you have not lived yet...
She will be signing autographs in the back...please do sign the guestbook
(this thread -----> ) on your way out and show
My Sooooooooooooul Sista Some LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE
just so you know...it runs in the family
tyte flowing poet whewwwwwwwwwwww!!!
Tyte Drop .
I am totally compelled to give you a ...and without a doubt...a ...
to the wonders of your awesome piece...I enjoyed the read
Thankyalawd, trin done dropped one on us finally. Girl, Ima use a line you used on me once: why you make us wait so long?? Dang!
This line is precious: go for midnight swims in the deepest chasms of my mind
One of the things I love about your work, besides the fact that you're a slammin poet, is the way your personality shines right through the words like a beacon. I can hear you and see you sayin the lines, and it makes the whole piece so warm, no matter what you're writin about.
I love it when you bring us along on one of those midnight swims, trin. Yo, come back more often, girl. It's good for all of us. :sand:
:spinsstar:WOW:spinsstar: looks like I dropped in RIGHT ON TIME....Triniti, this was another Masterpiece
Gurrrrrrrrrrrrrrlllllllllllll LOL thats my SOUL SISTAAAAAAAA
WHAT AM I GON DO WITH YOU!
Actually I think I will leave my brotha HOOKUP QQ to handle that question LOL and laaaaaaaaaaaaawd I DONT WANNA KNOW I DONT WANNA KNOW LOLOL Jes send ya sista an invite dont make me get momma QQ lol
my soul sister...It has been a beautiful emergence of sisterly love with our bond. You really are my SOUL sister. Much more than a kindred spirit, your own self awareness and confidence testify to da radiant light that is your essence and I...am purely humbled by it and of it. You are by far one of if not the most prolific poet here and yet you cherish your humble beginnings and insist oh spreading the love you overflowing with. I cant say anything else but thank you AND I'M GON TELL MOMMA YOU MADE ME CRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
you know someone should REALLY come up with a cure for GBS *lookin roun for da yahoo smilie thats on the floor laughing LOL* (oh well we will do it ghetto style :rolling: :rolling:
LOVE YOU MUCH MY SISTER
and just so you know...yes it does run in da family if they didnt know now they do
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