Black Poetry : Just a Moment of Thoughts....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 7, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And it flows much deeper
    than you know,
    as I am eternally submerged
    in your ocean, the emotion
    of this titanic notion
    finds me all aglow
    with anticipation, fear, and wonder.
    So, I need just a moment
    to keep my spirit from going under.
    Keeping myself afloat, to ensure
    I won't drop 20,000 leagues under the sea,
    in a plunge I must endure,
    if only for the chance to say
    I survived you, and lived to trust
    another day.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow,,,,,,
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    This piece is strength provoking!
    It inspires hope and determination
    to keep on striving for another day!
    Loved it!
     
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    Yes another day and all the days that follow...because you took that moment to regroup...to survive eternally...
    that was very deep, I was feeling where you were comming from and where you took it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed another day past from yesterday and many
    shinning days ahead this was on point
     
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    ooo, this is richly felt, watz. I am feelin ya too
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for responding TheOne.
    PurpleMoons, thank you for letting me know you felt the strength in this.
    Yes, queentswana, sometimes you have to take stock of what you already have going for you and keep thriving, thank you.
    Rich, one day seems to flow into the next but a positive outlook makes them shine, thank you.
    Glad to know you're feeling this one gempis, thanks.
     
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