Black Poetry : Just A Mellow Type of Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Dec 16, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the comfort of the fire’s hug,
    I hold on to memories long
    gone but surely not forgotten
    For my aching remains calm

    Remembering fondly the kiss you
    planted so sweetly upon my lips
    that caused shivers of ecstasy; those
    necessary to craft serene smiles

    I find myself joyously embracing
    every tremble as I tasted your warmth
    mentally and emotionally

    As kewl and composed as I am, I still
    yearn to make love to your innate lover’s
    affection; to join harmoniously with my own
    in an undeniable surrendering of souls

    The passion of fulfillment meets
    my need to securely hold on to
    your secret self; early in the quiet
    tenderness
    of silence where we love
    till pure exhaustion; but ever so softly

    Mmmm….

    it just feels right…

    Pleasured touches delight and
    fascinate beyond my wildest dreams
    as I caress your feminine qualities
    and anticipate all that love has to offer

    With all my silken sensuality in
    complete concert with your downy mental,
    I’ll feel you in the gentlest of ways

    and I'll be

    sure to soothe and comfort your heart to
    bring about a peace that personifies our
    mellowed longing to love

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a mellow type of love...

    mmmm... lovin' this. it flows so smoothely just like the meaning...
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    comforting this read was thank GQ i needed that..... beautiful
     
  4. redlady

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    nice piece...
     
  5. DIIMOND

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    Feelin U...... GQ..... Keep making me feel the smoothness & uniqueness of your flow.. I'll defintely be looking 4 more
    1 Luv
     
  6. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    GQ

    Nice...very nice.:toast: :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Q.....man dis love thing is wild flow on !
     
  8. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sigh. this is real nice...keep ya pen in motion
     
  9. Sunshyne

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    GQ...I think you are a very insightful brother. You reach deep down and express yourself in a way that I wish I could do. I am learning from a lot of you how to write what I feel and not worry about it having that rhyming flow that I am used to. I enjoy reading your work (and that of others here at Destee). I absorb as much as I can and store it away and hope one day I will commence to flow as smoothly as you all seem to do.

    Take care and keep inspiring others to write and express themselves in there own special way.

    Happy holidays to you and yours,
    "Sunshyne"
     
  10. Blkthunder

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    I feel ya
    and the ladies do too
    I know you aint even through
     
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