Black Poetry : JUST A MAN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside my chamber
    of many dreams
    i am a man

    at the close of my
    soulful pain
    i stand as man

    where many wars
    of struggles i house
    a home and battle
    coz
    i'm just a man

    who understand
    who knows the
    pit of pain
    who is in the war
    and never turn
    nor claim

    but on the groundz
    myth is pointed
    shame is named
    and the desires to live
    is only half the battle
    of a true struggle
    that lable us all in defeat

    but i'm just one man

    trying to make a stand
    and get to where many
    has gone ,so i lay sleepless
    inside my chambers in the
    cornerstone of my room
    and watch the victory
    saint da Lord .

    just a man .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this
    beautiful, and soft flow
    thats all i can say...
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Glorious indeed, loving this Rich!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and what a wonderful man indeed! i loved this so beautiful and honest...much respect for this one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz bklangel , sudden , true Love.......
    da victory not mines saint da Lord
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...I'm speechless

    this had such beauty and substance

    strength, wisdom...........

    I'm really feeling this Rich...This deserves an "Encore":spinstar:
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...nice and soft...God Bless
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelicsage.......it was a flow that hit me today and da pen
    dip in ink to scribe my thoughts...Thank u sistah

    BaduX.......ya blessing means a lot i'm graceful thank u
     
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    bangin

    had to say it.:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz skrybe7 ......it was som'em i had to release from da mind

    again thank u sistah Olakuoto.....