Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just a little mind escalation...hope it brings a smile to all who read

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisiteBalla, Jan 18, 2003.

  1. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    My Mental Escalations ...
    My vernacular spasms
    Come sporadically circumspect
    Ejecting what my thoughts are electing
    Injecting when you’re least expecting
    Ovations spurring mind elations
    Like a reflex come annotations
    With no interpretations
    Attempted dictations forming mystifications
    My words bless paper in way’s unimagined
    So as my pen leaks with fashion
    Observe my fervor
    Always enthralling my passion.

    I transmit what my mind
    permit’s not to omit
    We’re blessed as a people
    So coherent and articulate
    The flow’s contagious
    With each and every word
    We elect to exhibit.
    So it makes me smile
    As we unify
    Amalgamate
    Participate
    Partake
    Emancipate
    Elevate
    Facilitate
    Uplift and initiate
    Optimistic rhymes that
    Elate and satiate.
    :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
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    "mental escalation"

    I think that the poem had an appropriate title because I felt a mental crescendo upon reading. Keep up the good work!:)
     
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    Thank You GirlChild
    your reply
    brings a smile
    motivating thoughts
    making annotations go wild.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis has depth and truth within it and it's well posed
    let da ink continue .......
     
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