Black Poetry : just a flow off the top

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jan 27, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a freestyle
    some blues if may say.....
    .just a flow off the top of my head...
    so if ya likes cool.........


    Crossin ova
    In da wind exhale
    And feel the vibe….
    Starz turnin
    And the moon shinin
    As the string of
    my harp play
    a off beat tune
    playin down home blues……
    you take me in
    The wings
    of your love….
    Upon the grace…
    the kiss was tender…
    As my heart burns
    Dyin slow of this
    mad love spinnin
    inside as you
    stroke my pain
    and heal my sorrow....
    what have you
    done to me?
    I don’t know why
    I let you do these
    things to me
    sweeter
    then the taste of honey
    softer then feathers
    as you talk dat talk......
    out on a limb tryin
    to hold on…
    pullin pieces together
    try to be as I cant resist the
    taste that you give
    I need a doctor……
    I know I am sick….
    But the doctor say I am fine…..
    What you do to me….
    Gets me all feverish
    have me insane….
    Cant eat
    Cant sleep
    Cant even think right….
    Ya got ya hooks in me
    no turning back….
    I don’t know why
    I let you do these
    things to me
    never felt so
    unsure but
    sure of the
    love that floats..
    and makes me crazy
    so dizzy
    in my slumber
    you come to me….
    Take my hand
    and lead me to
    this place
    I never been before
    stuck like glue
    what ya do to me…
    cause see.......
    I aint never
    loved a man
    like I love you

    blkangel thang......2004
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this was def. tyte. what a nice way 2 say i love u to that special someone. much love to ya for this one!! :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow .....from da mental
     
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