Black Poetry : JUST A DREAM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nabraska, Sep 18, 2004.

  1. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can dream
    higher than the sky
    hopelessly aiming
    and never asking why

    A dream is life
    it never ends
    such as one hopes
    for family, money, and friends

    In circular motion
    round and round
    the toilet dream is full
    'till someone flushes it down

    Dreams travel
    in an upward motion
    some come small
    others bigger than the ocean

    When one lies
    and is ready for slumber
    just remember
    dreams can take you under.

    (C)2000 Clarence Barbee/Nabraska
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreams dreams dreams!!!!
    some can be sweet some can be bad
    some will take u under indeed
    tyte drop Nab...........
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, they have been known to take a few under. I dig this piece since I do dream a lot, thanks for allowing us to step inside your dream.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams can take us many places, sometimes to beautiful scenes, but other times they are nightmares. Flow some more.
     
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    lovin da pen flow here very gifted
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love da style you always have a way of taking me with you
    on ya poetic flows...tight drop...dreams can come true
     
  7. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    understood, i am definetly feeling you on this one. what can be said about dreams? as much as they are a good thing they can also have you knee deep in denial and out of touch with reality
     
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