Quiet Poetry Lounge : JUST A BUNCH OF NOTHING

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, May 28, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    You see these words
    They're mine
    From me
    Is the only way
    They could be
    The same way
    I form their shape
    I create their reality
    I master
    Their flow
    Take them where I go
    Give them meaning
    and then motion
    As I put them
    2getha
    Rhyme after rhyme
    time after time
    my words only
    get better
    From the eye of the artist
    Free flow
    is an act of art
    usin words to form concepts
    To just take them a part
    Reach for minds doors
    A minute ago
    These words did not exist
    Now they are creatively urs
    Laid out exactly how I wish
    Can make words fun
    Can make words dumb
    Can give em meaning
    And definition
    Can execute them
    With percision
    Lay em out as criticism
    Sticks and stones
    Is a condition
    If u don't know
    that words can bring harm
    Especially
    If I take em and
    Drop em like a bomb
    Or they can express
    a bunch of nothing
    Which is exactly
    What these words
    Were meant to do
    The real intent of this
    Piece was to say
    Sometimes I think of nothing too
    So theres nothing
    And nothing is everywhere
    I just took a bunch of nothing
    And
    Gave these words
    Some
    Air.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Words wit air is an expression of something from nothing ....nice drop wit words
     
  3. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    Though it started out as 'Just a bunch of nothing' u'r words speak volumes. Thank you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What may seem like not much in your eyes, may present a light bulb moment to others. Enjoying the creativity in your pen.
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *inhaling*
    *exhaling*
    WHOOO
    Sister..
    I know you felt this!!!!
    I could feel your vibe over here just is free flow position ready to blow!!
    The Evergy was serious over here
    Putting your words into FULL gear
    Flow on!
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this piece is so brilliant

    and your brilliance shines here

    it shines so much that your title is actually an oxymoron

    this is NOT just a bunch of nothing now that's what i call it

    loving the BK to RI connection

    and loving how you bring it ML
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was fun, yet it spoke volumns, ...enjoyed the piece poet.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright

    True, words are powerful when strung together
    and reach anothers eye and ear.


    I enjoyed this flow very much.
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im feeling the flow poetess!:hearts1:
     
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    nothing is better

    than reading your poetry

    hi nevar ;)
     
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