Black Poetry : Just a brain dump.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Apr 2, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok I was just letting go of somethings that were running around in my head.
    Needed to get it out. I am not sure if I know where it came from. But there it is.


    Slowly
    it creeps in.
    Uninvited and
    unexpected.
    Innocently
    conversations
    and sharing
    build a bond
    that soon
    evolves into
    something that you
    are too scared to define.
    Your head is telling
    you to turn around and run the
    other direction.
    Your heart is telling you that
    running is the last thing you
    want to do
    so you stay.
    And in staying you
    have decided to
    open yourself
    to whatever is
    to come.
    You refuse to
    look past the present
    because the future holds
    uncertainty.
    Living for the moment.
    You want to live
    for the moment
    but you forget
    that you can
    get caught in the moment.
    See there are no answers
    for all the
    questions you
    are asking your self.
    It is funny how attraction
    can affect you so.
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you already know

    so need i say more
    words :fairy:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u told it so well ....tyte
    i need not add more here
    flow on sis...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes words just flow out, lucky for us, they seep out as poetry. Keep it flowing.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    I don't know where it came from either, but it was a very nice floE....sounded real well :wave:
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all
    for the feedback.
    And all the luv.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you worked this piece...keep it comming.
     
  9. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for reading my work.
    Thanks for the feedback also.
     
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