Black Poetry : JUS SOO SAD

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  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the pain runs deep...
    enternally within...
    i can not be confortable...
    knowin you are not here
    with me!!!
    lovin you
    constantly has me
    tossin and turnin
    wantin and yearnin...
    feelings of my heart
    is pumpin low...
    as if i can see death...
    i am not ready to die...

    i thought we would be
    friends for life..
    you can not sell
    me out...
    for one cheap thrill...
    what about the kids
    we have talkd about...
    give me back my happyness...
    i am coverd with sadness...
    drinchd with tears...
    i didn't get much sleep last night...
    only to think of you...
    only a single thought of you,
    bring tears to my eyes...
    only wish i can make is
    wishin you were here wtih
    me!!!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully writen...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    indeed dis was awesome writting
    in due time one will come beside u
    lovin da flow
     
  4. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVELYGOLDENONE
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    thanx for the read!!!
    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:

    GOD BLESS :shades:
     
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    this is so heart felt. peace and love to you, sistah
     
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    this was posed so well
    heartfelt wow
    nice drop my sister... :angel1:
     
  7. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX FOR THE LUV

    [/B]Olakuoto -> thanx for the read sistah... i hope soon i will find my peace also.. thanx sistah

    [/B]gempis -> thanx for the read.. peace and luv to u also...

    [/B]Mzblkangel -> thanx for the read.. i am glad you liked this

    thanx
    MUCH LOVE
    GOD BLESS :luv:
     
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    you have a delicate tip to your pen...beautiful
    Peace
     
  9. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater- thanx for the read...and the upliftin reply...

    MUCH LOVE
    GOD BLESS :jumping: