Black Poetry : jus one dance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Nov 4, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The music is playin
    Dancin, grindin the ground.
    He's lookin @ me :yo: , me lookin @ him :luvv: .
    She's @ the bar like, "Sh*t!"
    Jus lookin @ both of us! :eek:hmy:
    Nervousness and distress on her face!

    Finally, hip 2 hip,
    Touchin like we've met before!
    His hands ridin up my backside
    Makin me take an extra step.
    My hands rubbin up his frontside.
    Lickin of the lips,
    Makin the atmosphere hot as hell.
    A touch on my shoulder,
    Its the woman from the bar!
    "Excuse me miss,
    can i have this dance...
    with my husband!!" :help: :jawdrop:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in the blissful twist
    step in the lady miss
    hubby in a raptured
    notion body all in motion

    dancing feelin da way
    as the music play
    now da statement made
    see u gotta be good
    walk away from where
    they stood ........lol
    yeap u need help!
    da miss......

    love the dance play here dis was tyteee flowin
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....nice flow...
    bad ending fo her lol
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow sista....
     
  5. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx all 4 the luv
    GOD BLESS
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx 4 da luv :thanks:
     
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    wooooe
    :laugh:
    liking this flow
    Peace
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my....

    :jawdrop:


    wasn't this hot....and heavy...

    loved it, lol
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 4 the love
    GOD BLESS
     
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    nice work

    Thisline is Hott *** His hands ridin up my backside
    Makin me take an extra step.
    My hands rubbin up his frontside.
    Lickin of the lips, ***
     
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