Black Poetry : Juices Flowin, I Wanna Write Something!!

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind is like sayin
    Write something!!
    Write something!!
    I know I wanna write
    Some deep ****, some
    **** that grabs yo ***
    And then pinches it.
    I wanna tell how
    My bruthas are mislead
    By the white man.
    And the same bruthas
    Are running to the
    Same white mans,
    White woman.
    About how much I loved
    This man once upon a
    Time.
    About how I was mislead
    into his arms and
    soon after was left
    with a Dear Serenti
    Letter.
    About how my thighs
    Become slippery from
    My juices when I see you.
    About how my thirteen year old sister
    Constantly asks me when
    Is mama comin back and I
    Have to give her that
    Baby-please-baby-please-
    Don’t-ask-that-question-today
    Look.
    About how I just can’t quite
    Get to work on time
    And drop my little sis
    Off too.
    About how I can’t pay
    My rent on time because
    Being a teacher doesn’t
    Quite make the big $$.
    About how when I dance something
    Takes over me, and the
    Music jumps my bones, until
    I’m dripped dry.
    About how my depression comes right
    After I’m extremely happy.
    How the little gurl at school
    Always has a question to ask
    Me like if practice makes perfect
    But no one’s perfect why do we
    Have to practice?
    About how the lil young boy’s at
    School tries to “holla” at me,
    And beg me for tutoring after
    AND before school.
    About how I’m tired of being the
    Responsible friend, the
    Driver on Saturday nights.
    About how everybody and they
    Mama knew O.J. was guilty
    As hell.
    About how I need to grow up but
    No one’s there to smack me on
    My *** and say Serenti Marie
    Grow yo *** up.
    About how if everything
    Was an eye for an eye
    Then the world would
    Be blind.
    About how holding hands,
    If you let it, can be a
    Sexual action.
    About how sometimes you
    Just want someone
    To hold you with
    Strong arms and
    Tell you you’re the best.
    I wanna write something!!
    I wanna write something!!
    But I guess I just don’t know
    What to write.

    Surry about the cussing in the beginning fam, had to get that point across. Please don’t spank me this time. :) Peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    well, i heard that. all of it. that was tyte serenti. just keepin it real sis
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ay ay ay lol you goin get me in trouble thanks for the response anyway :) I haven't seen some of your work in a minute Purple wassup? anywayz peace and blessins keep flowin :)
     
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    i know. just enjoying everybody elses flow.but for real this here vibe is like that
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna write something!!
    I wanna write something!!
    But I guess I just don’t know
    What to write.

    If you don't know what to write and this is what came out...I can't wait for you to figure out what to write about.
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luvin the way your thoughts flow into existence...can only imagine what the convo would be like....you hav a gift so dont ever hesitate to write...urspiritandsoulrmovinme.....thanku
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks cypher that means alot to me I try me best to make my work touch people and I am blissfully happy that it touched you. and your very welcome

    Royal T thanks gurl for the positive not that means alot to me peace and blessins all keep flowin
     
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