Black Poetry : Judging eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticly_yours, Mar 5, 2004.

  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your judging eyes
    curse me
    what bitter lies they tell
    those beaming eyes piercing
    d*mn me to go to hell
    release your gaze
    get out you daze
    of stereotypes
    step to the light
    why must ignorance rule you
    make you kill
    make you not feel
    the wrong in what you do
    those eyes those eyes
    you think there wise
    the truth is that those eyes tell lies
    they don't seek what is true
    they simply judge just like a fool
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like those eyes are wearing blinders to the truth. Tight scribe here, nice style.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    eyez of a devil
    one not to be judged
    without reading the pages
    flow on i feel ya
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    enjoyed your scribe....
    hope to read more
    it was posed very well
    and spoke loud
     
  5. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    thanks you all for the positive words

    :wave:
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nuff said!

    That goes for me to!
     
  7. angelicsage

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    So so True...
    This scribe was completely on point.
    Eyes...percieve nothing but surface appearance.
    Yet, many of us still rely on this variably weak
    sense for definition.

    Nice Scribe.
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those eyes are definitely watching me at work!! Thank you for such a beautiful write. It was on point!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, we can't judge a book by its cover...
    on point piece..............

    jh
     
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    tru indeed...
    only the insecure judge without
    knowing da real deal....

    them fool need to straight up
    chill... for real
    nice piece
    one love
    khasm
     
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