Black Poetry : Joy, Pure Bliss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling so good about us lately
    i discovered that i am not the only one missing
    and that when we are not together
    i realize you must be missing me too
    so when I start missing you
    i think of you missing me and
    how the love i have for you
    is true through to the end
    and the fact that you would
    walk into a burning building or
    jump in front of these drive by shootings
    to protect me from any harm
    proves to me that you have my back
    and what else in life can i ask?
    My whole existence I just wanted to be
    a part of something real and not just something
    its why I balled and when that dried up
    deflated i sat in a corner - unused, neglected and abused
    I wasn't trying to make you feel good when
    i told you you make me feel like I am 17 again
    That was the last time i felt joy, pure bliss
    where nothing else mattered except the here and now
    and the only thing alive then for five minutes was me and the ball
    Right now, late at night, i sit pondering thoughts and
    listening to your compassioned speeches about thug life
    and I wonder what it is I am drawn to about him
    or in him or is it just him
    and its when i realize its everything that makes him
    REAL
    the way he has the ability to act like a gleeful child
    enthralled with the smallest acts of god
    or the way he turns business mode
    in the restless count of two
    or how i know he has a million responsibilities
    and how I know he will take care of a his and ten of someone elses
    the sweet sound in his melodic voice when he honestly promises to never intentionally hurt me
    he's real and I have realized
    that i owe him the real me too
    so enough with the jealousy, envy ****
    i don't need to dream about tomorrow or question next week
    I don't need to know where he is or who he is with
    he'll be missing me as I am surely missing him
    so i'll rewind the time when he stared into my eyes
    and listend to me break down a rhyme
    and i knew he loved me too
    i know right here right now I have found joy, pure bliss
    i ain't gonna keep pushing it.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So very very nice to hear you happy, sistah girl. U deserve it. This flow is tight as ell.
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis thanks girl. happiness is a state of mind we create for only ourselves. reminding myself of that everyday.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice Randee..and i'm with gempis...i'm happy to see you happy.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful to see u happy and full of joy
    love dis flow indeed
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love, again, as always and forever.

    isn't it wonderful when you stop wallowing and realize all the things going right with your life. once you realize you make your own destiny life gets easier.
     
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    love the flow...and sooooo glad your happy
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes gurl YES some people take forever to learn what you have already learned :)
     
  9. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like I've been learning a lot lately. Just doing me.
     
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    keep it up gurl cause we learning from you sharin your lessons wit us :)
     
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