Quiet Poetry Lounge : JOURNEY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I took this journey into time
    where warmth and hope truely shine
    inside the glist of her mind
    learn something very divine

    I've held her thoughts against mines
    and together we was one line
    her heart was so tenderly kind
    that's when i knew she da one

    O' ye Beloved forth thy journey
    is sweet and dearing we sharing
    in harmonies and da melodies
    whisper through da galaxy

    It was thee by fate and motion
    that set us on sail for my handz
    is da pillow and your eyez my guide
    as we continue on path

    THis Journey is beautiful !
     
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    lovealexandria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think it's beautiful that you found someone to share your mind with as well as your heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you so kindly , i hope i did......I have to wait til the smoke clear again Thank you lovealexandria
     
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    I love the journey this poem took me on and hope that it all that you've been longing for
     
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    asimplepoet.......I wish and i hope for it to be only time will tell.......Thankz a million
     
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    A journey my heart will never forget like a dream come true
    but is it just a journey i'm wishing for or have ......Hummm!!!
     
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