Quiet Poetry Lounge : Journey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ujima, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Solidify this journey we are destined to make.
    You exhale, while I inhale every sweet breath you take.
    Your masculine hands attached to mine, releases strength, love, endurance, and
    an unspeakable ray of never-ending sunshine.
    I am entrapped, entangled, and enraptured inside of you.
    Like time traveling through space, nothing but intangible energy of love exudes.
    It wasn’t by chance or choice that we met,
    but it was God’s collaboration, an experience I shall never forget.
    I have relinquished all negative vibes and uprooted unrighteous souls.
    You have replenished me with upright, positive, and vibrant energy
    that completes me and makes me whole.
    You complement the desired things in my life that I may lack.
    You have illuminated parts of my life that were once dark, dismal, and black.
    This journey that we have begun has no conclusive revelation.
    You and me becoming and continuing as one
    is our final destination.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done love da flow
     
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    sweet flow
    i was stuck from top to bottom
    very nice read
    :angel1:
     
  4. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Y'all! I love the positive feedback!

    Stay focused!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed love ya flava of flowz too
    keep droppin it like dis
     
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