Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Nov 17, 2002.
Swiftly moving train
thru the countryside so vast
please bring my love back
I hope he returns with love a thousandfold...just as he left on the train and u watched it make its way into the distance, so I hope your love returns on that train-the love train!!! loooveellt one Gaylee!!
self love within here
da train is headed back home
fill wit lots of love
Gaylee Nice Hiaku, If he was free, I am sure he woud come back.
Thank you Mkaha lo', $$RICH$$ and dojo54 for taking standing on the train station plattform with me here.
My first time really exploring HAIKUS...
Really liked this one...
My imagination can wander with this one...
I can imagine everything from a mother watching her only son go off to war...
A woman whose man has decided to leave their small town for the big city life...
It was wonderful...
You wrote an entire novel wit dese heah 17 thingys...how'd you do dat??? This is absolutely beautiful!!!
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