Black Poetry : journey with me*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Aug 31, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my iii's are formed thru metaphors--
    flow thru my river of
    multi-syllabics--
    see my
    lyrical tears--
    feel my cyber-anguish--

    at the same time--
    relate to the good times--
    feel the sunshine--
    excuse me...sunshYne
    as if it rested upon your shoulder--

    you should try floating down the street to
    my rhythm within*
    i be
    scrapin the world with fine-toothed combs...*

    smoothin' out my dents with words that relax
    soothing the mental muscle--
    purusing the everyday hustle and bussle--
    cruising down memory lane--
    without a care
    a worry
    a trouble...

    y'all should journey with me*.

    luv.


    sean.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thepoetsean!

    I'm vibing with you! Love this stroll inside your mental!

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    U MOST DEFF TOOK ME THEIR! DOWN THE LANE
    WALKING WIT MY HEAD UP:D
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanxabunch!

    thank y'all 4 smellin' this one.

    RICH
    &
    A
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With a vibe like this !

    I'll journey with you anywere !!!! :)
     
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    Loved it!

    Now this was a change of pace and I loved it--nice word play and flow--Amun-Ra
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!


    i'm all packed & ready for the journey... don't forget
    to pick me up!! :) you are soooo beautifully talented.

    (have i told you that enough yet?)

    ALWAYSLove.
    Elayne~
     
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