Quiet Poetry Lounge : JOURNEY II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by godsmantru, Apr 18, 2008.

  1. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Calling a taxi, exuse me sir, can you help me?
    Take me all the way there, and all the way back,
    I have to get my Journey back on track:
    Cant fix this one, have to buy somethig new,
    My God I'll be glad when this Journey is through
    All the way back, past where I'd been
    Continuing the journey, and now I begin
    Drive and drive, sleep in my eyes
    Expensive phone calls, the journey stalls
    starting all over, run past the clover
    why did yo leave, got my heart on my sleeve
    demons attack: Im still fighting back
    Tears flowin', everybody knowin'
    I dont even care my God is aware
    Stronger and stronger, Days gettin' longer
    Down on my knees for my spirit to please
    I'll never give in gonna win this fight
    My God lets me know it all turns out right
    the journeys not over, but the destinations in sight:
    My Victory is coming I'm a wttness this night!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stay on the path which you came
    within da journey goddness to claim
    aim high and move slow
    tonight da victory will surely show

    Very nicely done and well felt ......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The journey can have it's detours and rocky roads, but through it all you stay on course.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS Sure seems like a journey to me!
    You really took it there with this poem
    Flow on!!!!!!
    Doing a GREAT Job
     
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