Black Poetry : Journey 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My essence is as the wind
    in motion circulating feelings
    devotion

    i Am appalled by my lack
    of understanding
    nothing is clear to me

    facts remain sidelined
    awkwardly
    mere physical issues
    are reflected to me spiritually

    as a child, i began to grow
    is this why i still feel as a child
    may
    looking thru a picture window
    at people who really can't see me
    per reason or chance

    aghast
    i grip to reality
    agonizing trips
    searing jolts of "holy" sanity
    pardon me
    but on the real, you can call me,
    Blasphemy
    cause honestly
    the One who i give praise to has
    been accursed more than
    the ancestors who might ask for me

    a violent plea
    actively i want to live
    i guess the idea of pleasure in
    the garden
    is put on a plane of possibility
    will i be Next?

    see my trust has been blown aback
    like the forehead of the poor
    eagerly present
    receiving the stranger's
    hidden pistol report
    in gutta ways
    i offa my body if i may
    so those who passed away
    can have a place to parlay
    to help my brethren
    find they way
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess the idea of pleasure in
    the garden
    is put on a plane of possibility
    will i be Next? - Antar

    Speaks to me
    I'm diggin' this...
    Blasphemous?
    Ridiculous!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was hot awesome whoaaaaaaaaa
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll...

    One love..
     
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    i really like this flow
    enjoy it indeed
    nice one
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep:
    i offa my body if i may
    so those who passed away
    can have a place to parlay
    to help my brethren
    find they way

    Keep flowing as you do...
     
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