Black Poetry : Jones

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by afrostotle, Apr 29, 2004.

  1. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jones

    At first glance
    By fate and not
    By chance
    In she …I became
    Entranced
    Unbeknownst to her
    My crimson capsule
    Danced at the thought
    of me and she
    In a Uhuru infused
    Ebony romance
    SHHHHH…..
    Let me wishshshsh
    As I-
    With clenched fists
    Grip the hips of –
    And- with curled
    Toes and a sip of beautiful
    Brown lips…..
    Let me tango and tryst
    with my afro-puffed
    Subconscious 70’s soul
    Sista Miss……

    SHHHH…..**** how a Brotha wish
     
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    To some of us...wishes do come true, keep your fingers crossed. That was so warm and enlighting. your scribe is good keep it comming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte wish that can come true indeed
     
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    aww yeah, I love it when you grace us with a flow, afrostotle. Love the simplicity and conciseness of this.
     
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    Wistful meandering of lust, eloquently expressed!
     
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    yup

    cool man, cool ;)
     
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    Love the vibe...
    your giving here
    as I read, I thought
    to myself this is kind
    of a different flavor
    than some of your
    others...but I'm
    totally captivated...
    by this *subconscious 70's soul*
    flowing in poetry...about
    the Jones...

    ^5 Brother...I can dig it
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    d_mn g
    sound like me (how i be feelin) :look:
    (lol) at the beginnin
    of yo junt
    dawg, i cannt even
    myself to thinkin as far as a kiss...

    this is on hit
    the imagery, energy
    clinched fists

    one love,
    /antar
     
  9. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the Fam: "Big Bout cha"

    AngelicSage: Sistah I hope you didn't find this too much of a digress...I just live in a town where the only place I find "Just Us" is in the klink...And I really do miss my sistas..Not for the superficial..But for the "supernatural"

    One Love Sista Queen.

    To all who replied: Peace Power, and Prosperity
    For I am Because We are- We are Because They were.
     
  10. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woah...I'm diggin this make me wanna go pop in my Love Jones soundtrack LOL:wink:
    Lovin it :deal:
     
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