Black Poetry : joeyjoejoejoe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baglady, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. baglady

    baglady Member MEMBER

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    I've liked you since last school year
    I dont even think you know.
    Your friends say you think im pretty and cute,
    i wish i knew that was true...
    I have so much love to give,
    but not one to give it to,
    your the picture of perfection in my eyes,
    and i was hoping i could give it to you...
    I know you'll never read this,
    thats y im writing from my heart..
    When i see you pass by...wit your guitar on your back
    you looks so fine..it makes me want to melt..
    I know this sounds crazy
    and i know you'll never be mine
    but joe im really feelin' you
    i wish you'd give me time...
    We are really good friends now
    and i wouldnt change it for the world..
    you tell me your deepest feelings,
    and how you really want a gurl..
    i know im not like the gurls you've liked
    but i was hoping you'd give me a try...
    i live to care for you
    like stevie, you are the sunshine of my life...
    Knowing i wont be with you makes me want to cry.
    But knowing im your bestfriend
    makes it all worth the while.... :nuts:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww...this is sweet...i liked it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from the heart well felt sweet scribe
    nicely expressed
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    i enjoyed this
    thaks for sharing
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is meant to be happens, hard when it's not exactly what you want, I know. This was sweet and heartfelt.