Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, May 16, 2005.
lovely piece,your words flowed beautifullly!
Thanks Sherlita. I first started not to post this then something said" Lighten up and post this poem". so I did. At first I was like " What the Heck?"
Then I got to the fourth paragraph and I understood.
See you all later. Got things to do.
Feed off of Jesus, and never hunger.
this was sweet and heavenly
I get what you're saying in your explaination...Writing something and thinking maybe you shouldn't go about it this way, and then saying, hey it's okay. I liked the off the cuff way you went about it, gets the readers attention, and I like the message as well. Flow on.
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