Black Poetry : Jermaine...

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jermaine…
    (To The Love Of My Life, On Our 2 Month Anniversary…)
    When words just can’t seem to express the compassion I have for you, I just sit and I reflect upon our new found love. For you have become my stars in the sky, and you have taken me on that magic carpet ride, and have taken it upon your self to become the potter of my heart, mending the broken pieces and molding me into an ideal lover.
    How sweet is your voice that so often pacifies my disturbed psyche?
    You always find the perfect word to say to me that somehow miraculously change my very mood.
    You’ve made me promises that you’ve somehow stayed true to, like not another could do but you.
    How on Gods green Earth did I ever live this life with out you?
    Going day to day without a companion such as yourself there to help up hold me and comfort me the way you do that is just indescribable.
    But now that you’ve arrived, I pray that you never leave
    For it seems that without you, I could not be.
    So with a heart that shall be forever at your debt,
    I hope you receive these words of love, that flow from my heart, through my pen and hopefully will end up at the door of your heart,
    But may you reply to the incessant knocks of these words at your hearts entry, and receive them, just as you have received me.

    Love Always & Forever…

    Melanie
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this so beautiful and warm surely Jermaine will love this
    your heart is deep and your soul is love for thy soulmate
    by the way congratulation on ya 2 months Anniversary !!
     
  3. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearts2: :kiss1: :hearts2:

    Awwwe thank you so much $$RICH$$
    for the poetic love and support. I just love
    this part of your reply, because that is so true.
    And from both me and Jermaine, we wanna
    say thank you for your heart felt "Congrat's"...!
    "keep Em Comin Bro"...1​
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow very emotional and i just love it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwe...wow...
    Thank You Angel....
    You shouldnt have..lol
    Im glad you enjoyed it, your the reason
    why i continue to write..!
    "keep Em Comin Sis"...1

    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    there's nothing more sweeter then two souls feeling the beauty
    of loving and such a newly vow of hearts ....most welcome to u
    both and many blessing upon ya life together .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a lovely expression of a love, I'm sure your Jermaine will love this. Wishing the two of you all the best poet.
     
  8. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey "Watz"..!
    Thank you So much
    for the love and warm wishes.
    "KEEP EM COMIN"... 1


    P.S...Oh and by the way,
    he LOVED my poem..lol...

    :kiss1:
     
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    Aw, this is beautiful, sister girl! Keep on flowin, aiight? :dj:
     
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    ...the use of text and color
    really pulled us into the feel
    of a real...love letter
    as if it were being sent
    directly to your reader...

    Heartfelt scribe...
    Keep up the good work poet
    Sage
     
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