Black Poetry : Jazzy Minute (for dnommo)

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eric Benet? No, I think I hear
    Miles today...kissin' the air
    As I see you drift with a glass
    Of Chianti
    Watchin' you, as the sun
    Goes down
    The moon takes over in the
    Night to work as your light
    I see your silhouette tryin'
    To draw me near
    I, blinded by the scent of
    Your smell, which makes
    Ecstasy clear
    Drownin' off the smell of
    Somethin' so sweet...
    Guessin' at the name of that
    Incense lingerin' in the air
    Love rhapsody playin' as
    Our bodies intertwine
    Relaxin' off the sound of
    Miles as I gaze through the
    Darkness of your eyes
    Tryin' to see how far I can
    Go without lettin' you know
    Tryin' to see how far Miles
    Will take us...hmmm
    Slowly, not in a rush,
    Locked in the taste of your
    Lips
    Still rollin' off the twist of
    Chianti
    Mmm, movin' to the swayin'
    Of your hips
    ****, leavin' me gaspin'
    For air
    Mesmerized by somethin'
    You've said
    But instantly forgettin' as
    Miles dances through my
    Ears
    You pourin' me another
    Glass of Chianti as Miles
    Subsides away and
    Coltrane or Najee begins
    To play
    Nah, baby, let's not start
    This again....

    ~~~dnommoslowjazzymomentswituisalryght~~~

    thank you for allowing me to rediscover these slow jazzy moments with you, dear friend.
     
  2. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah, but the evening has just begun
    as the night makes way for the light
    flickering from the scented candles
    as the incense fades away;

    I brush your brow trying to remove
    the tensions of the day as you rest
    in my arms; the scent of your perfume
    leaves me in a euphoric state;

    I hesitate, for I desire more and yet,
    I enjoy this moment when you and I
    can love without making love for the
    physicality complicates the moment;

    so I smile as you dream as I dream
    and wish as I wish yet you don't know
    that when you awaken your dreams
    will appear with a slow tender kiss.

    the moments are sweeter the second time around my friend...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    lovin da jazzy flow on dis one !!:D
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister.


    my dear sweet friend!!...

    thanks for giving this beautiful gift to us...
    on your born-day!! i loved the feel of this
    & i could hear Miles faint-ly playing in the
    background! :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    had to post it again...
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love...

    I remember this piece...I am feeling the music engulfing my head, and it just feels so good.
    jazzy
    E
     
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