Black Poetry : Jazz Duet ~ Pookie's Suite

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Jan 13, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after all these years...

    people be asting me
    what i see in his jazz
    why i stretch all the
    way out between
    the brotha riffs & scats....
    and why it feels so
    good to be loving like that

    he hits his licks so righteous
    .... coming hard....
    and slow, and it be just
    honest-to-goodness, str8 up
    flow

    {i confess i seriously dig what
    the brotha know}....

    so

    i stopped trynna
    explanify
    how i ain't
    happy 'less he
    making
    me cry

    then we du/et

    ~spread my alto
    all ova his
    saxy whine...

    curl up
    inside his jazz
    &
    fit just fine


    Alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was stretch poetry.........

    *opening-mind*

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cry cry cry babyyyy!!!

    sistah A .
    cuddle up in his jazzy saxy
    and be loved in da tune
    from ya room of str8 beauty
    u pose here .........cry on and flow mo!!!:) :heart: :kiss:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL

    Sustah A ~ go on head and just du/et then!

    Thank you for sharing this talented piece! You got it ma! :D


    N2
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Play on Poet...Nice.

    BE
     
  6. dnommo

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    true jazz is poetry...this is tight scribe...

    one.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you found that "stretch"
    cuz
    somtimes
    sopranos be complainin'
    bout those
    that claim they can keep in rhythm
    sayin' they play tha oboe
    to perfection
    knowin' it be not they forte'
    in reality
    they make most cry from laughing--
    playing piccolo in sixteenth notes
    with breath not enough to last
    the duration of a measure--
    premature cresendos
    faster than frosty winds blow
    so
    hope you all
    continue to du/et...
    du/et well

    andneverchange*

    sean

    (LOVIN' THIS HEAH!)
    lovely peece alyce!

    :nuts:
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    readin' dis... makes me feel like callin' for an encore!

    it's all fantastical-ly You! thank you for sharin'. :)

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    I could almost hea the track playin in the background to dis! I'm lovin it!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  10. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    I must once again bow to the queen. Your style is amazing! :toast:
     
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