Black Poetry : Jazz and Blues (off the top of the dome)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *boo doo boo dee do dat dow*


    hot city streets--
    show no pity to weary feet--and

    beds don't get layed in much enough of none--
    cuz workin's always done--

    gritty nightmares in which life is what it be--
    can't tell dream from

    r e a l i t y

    ****'s ****** up and because--
    the world lacks
    hope
    life
    liberty
    love...

    what life
    hope
    liberty does is--
    create plentiful--
    love

    and without those three--
    mathmatics is s h i f t y
    cuz three minus love can't equal--

    peace health equality--
    only--
    hardpressed-ness and utter insanity
    certainly--
    easily--

    cold hard pain grinding against short life
    speaking of jazz and blues-like

    amerikkka is the proud sponsor--
    amerikkkas atmosphere--
    created the equation--
    where three minus love equals--
    negativity--
    antagonism and--
    deep seated depression--

    **** must change.

    sorry for the rude revolution but--
    i just thought i'd stir the mind...
    with the origin of jazz and blues--

    america made us make it.

    (don'tbethewhiteman'snegro)

    sean.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enuf said -- black man!!


    One :heart:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks N2

    glad you felt the rhythm.

    sean.
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Copasetic !!!

    BE
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ON DA 1-10 SCALE.....

    ....eeeehhhhhhhh **** it!!!!

    this can't be measured at all!!!!


    u go boy!!!



    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peeps!!!

    SG glad to see you writing again in destee...i thought you had gone ghost on a bruh for a sec....thanx 4 the read.

    Heartbeat i enjoy your work, glad to see that you enjoy mine.

    N2 thanx for the read sweetie...as always i'm looking forward to your next peece!


    sean
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    throwin this back up...i'm in the crates today...
     
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    word is bond son
    no uncle toms allowed...
    this was tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
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    lovin't this...
     
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