Black Poetry : Jamaican Style

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 22, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wish you could meet my Jamaican lova
    He's not even a brotha
    Yet He freaks like the rhythm of reggae
    With the beatz frequently
    Coming with the heat
    His style is oh so sweet
    And got luv fo a sista
    He knocks me off my feet
    And in water we drowned into our pleasure
    crystal clear
    the beaches we were wrapped into
    Grains of sexual and extreme measures
    And our flow was tight
    Deep into the night
    Luv so right
    Couldn't even put up a fight
    Cuz his skin is so soft and his lips are so tender
    As his kisses caressed my body with gentleness
    I was raptured
    And all sorrow was deleted for another tommorrow
    And the thunder and the clouds could no longer remain
    Even the lightening was no longer in sight
    And this Latin hombre
    Was caressing me
    The tatoo of an eagle
    Was on his back
    I couldn't get enough
    Of you
    Cuz you taste so good
    .....
    And my mood
    Was turquoise and blue that was light
    And I was mezmorized
    Jamaican Style
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohmygoodness...

    my my my

    2fish
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeeee!!! i gotta sit back on dis one and watch !
     
  4. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** gurl, got me wantin to catch the next flight to jamaica!!
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thought you would like this one!

    hee hee hee hee
     
  6. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>fades in>

    Nice work!
    I love the way this piece unfolds and moves and oh, how it grooves!

    Keep the flow moving...

    <fades out<...
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** stella gets her groove back fo rreal yo nice destee
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't No loving like Island lovin!

    For true...one does know what da love can do to you...and when it be running you through and through a chile don't know just what to do...but da grown folks do! hahahahahahah
    ONE LOVE! ONE LOVE...LET'S GET TOGETHER AND FEEL ALRIGHT!
    Blessings on Ya house!
     
  9. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey madd, it's me desert storm remember? lol anywayz.... umm thanks for all the reply
    dats ma man! lol ha ha ha ha
    jamaican style
     
  10. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, u got me on this one.
    nice work.
     
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