Black Poetry : Jamaica Trilogy #1: Delilah's Breeze (repost)

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Delilah's Breeze...[#1 in the trilogy]

    "Jamaica is beautiful
    In the Summer time"

    Delilah whispered

    And the words
    Kissed her lover
    In the island breeze

    Then the wind
    Grabbed her
    By the waist side
    And her hips
    Began to dance

    Then 'Delilah The Temptress'
    Brought her lover
    To his knees

    The air lifted
    Her hands
    Just above her
    Silken face

    And smooth
    Delilah,
    Smooth

    Bounced her breasts
    To the rhythm
    Of ocean waves

    While the sun
    Highlighted
    Her thick, black, corn rows
    Plaited neatly in place

    She was the picture
    That her lover
    Would remember
    Always

    "Jamaica is beautiful
    In the Summer time"

    Delilah whispered

    And she captured
    Her lover
    Forever

    Inside of
    The breeze...


    *Hunter*
     
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    (pEEP)

    NICE REALLY LOVING THIS FOR REAL KID IT HIT THE SPOT jAMCIA I TAKE IS BEAUTIFUL
     
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    Belle ... your flow soothes my soul

    thank you for this

    :heart:

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    i be...

    ...da breeze
    dat blew through
    Delilah's hair
    that lifted her
    on the carpet of orgasm's flow
    and took her where
    all chilled winds go
    with breasts afloat
    hither
    to and fro
    i be da breeze
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MS BELLE...

    girl gone & flow like you know!!

    this on hea makes me wanna say **** work
    & bills... & book myself a flight to jamaica! :)

    thanks for sharing...

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    welcome belle...we've been waitin for you...

    love this piece, my friend...
     
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    Mistress of da Stroke...

    you know what I'm feeling ~ so I'ma just say this ONE thang...

    take us home nah!!!!! #3 please...


    A :wink:
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank-you peeps for the read :)

    #3 still simmering in my island pot
    When it cools I will serve the "Calaloo Soup"

    thanks again family for the read

    *n3s*
     
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    Huntress B,

    Ya done snuck up in here under anotha psuedonym huh?

    Belle, Hunter - whateva!!! Ya flows are always on!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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