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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My life is quiet
    sweetly simple
    my world is
    vast & unexplored
    base in mysteries
    body three
    children of deed
    meek and warm
    living as one
    til we divide way
    from da trumpet
    my prayer tonight
    as pen in hand
    to be written
    a blessing a teardrop
    and souls savor
    around da corner
    lay hopes and dreams
    moments of joy
    blossome from sorrow
    reflecting off da sword
    of pride & wisdom
    i stand in the hourglass
    of tomorrow in da
    empty shell of life
    as echos breeze in
    a tear fall leaving
    a stain upon the landz
    thy mystery alive
    it's all i take with me .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is reading like a last testament of sorts Rich. Reflecting upon yesterday, and cautiously looking toward the future. Such an intense somber tone....<deep sigh> I have no more words right now for this poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    words more then enough thankz sis for the statement is thy confession
    peace sista watz
     
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    this was a rich psalms this was deep mental wow
    love the flow just love it......can i hang this one too?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sure sis if u got anymore room thankz for the lovin support u give much luv at ya sweetie
     
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    I'm pretty speechless right now, sweetheart. This is profound and beautiful and I adore it, like I adore you. :grouphug:
     
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    likewise sista gempis i too adore u and the connection is beautiful
    thank u for the love and support to my art .
     
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