Black Poetry : IWANNABE

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Iwannabe…

    So extensively deep mentally
    That I comprehend life fully,
    Understand Soulfully and emotionally.
    So deep that I can decipher fate and destiny,
    Then send seeds of thought through telepathy,
    Impregnating the minds of the foolish,
    So that a proper understanding might be born in them.
    Blossom inside, educate and enlighten,
    So they can realize a true soul is key.

    Iwannabe…

    The individual who
    Shows' drowning hearts how to swim
    And falling souls how to fly.
    The one to make clear where true immortality lies,
    Where genuine fame resides.
    Because of me all facades would flee.

    Iwannabe…

    Less of a poet, more of a knight in shining armor.
    Giving lost men clear paths to march,
    Uninspired men ambitions to achieve,
    Atheist's rationale to believe,
    Blind men fresh eyes so they can see,
    I desire to set the confined, free.

    Iwannabe…

    Controversial,
    The issue of continuous debate.
    I want to create, procreate and erase,
    New fads and tastes.
    I want new, innovative thoughts and philosophies
    All based off my poetry.
    I call for a cease to all false prophesy.
    Death to each false prophet,
    Who hoodwinks and profits,
    From disorder and vulnerability,
    Defying Realness and stability,


    Iwannabe…

    The answer to everything.
    A poetic messiah
    Whose words move the masses
    And shatters all social classes.
    Redefining conventional logic and common sense.
    divulging truth so my brothers and sisters can reap the benefits.
    I want us to realize that we can all be different
    And all still fit in
    Every last variation of human being
    should be on the same team.

    Iwannabe

    Thought of as supreme.
    I must have you to know that I mean,
    This that I write.
    And I pray this survives everlasting through time.
    That in spite of when breath in me will cease,
    Despite when my heartbeat leaves,
    My words will never die.
    Because they like I,
    One day, will ascend to the status of
    Poetically divine. ​
    :ref: Thats a wrap
    www.poetrypoem.com/iwannabe
    Chi-town, over and out :spinstar:
     
  2. Dupe

    Dupe Active Member MEMBER

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    that was beautiful and i wanna be different
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe nicely done ........
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight. Especially since that's your name anyway. As I was reading this I found myself saying, "I wanna be that too." :) Tight flow, I loved it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To want your words to teach and reach, I understand wanting this, and what a creative and powerful piece.
     
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    Iwannabe the pen in your hand, cuz u sure know how to handle it! :slobber:
     
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