Black Poetry : I've Noticed YOU Too BALLER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Mar 13, 2002.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've noticed you too.
    The gentleness of your eyes.
    The blues they defy.

    The depth of your voice,
    The way your words touch my soul.
    My heart skips a beat.

    Your flow...our joy.
    You know want a woman wants
    And you write it well.

    Each time you come in...
    All the ladies inhale once.
    You've blessed this forum.

    Just before hope leaves...
    You bring her back with your pen -
    She's mine once again.

    Your laughter brings joys.
    Your pen lifts with mighty love.
    Indeed I've noticed.

    You lift God's name high.
    When your soul is feeling Him...
    I've felt Him with you.

    How can I look past?
    Your gift gets my attention.
    Your ink seized my soul.

    You overwhelm me.
    You ink is a deep ocean...
    I'm willing to swim.

    Keep writing Baller.
    You are a joy to read from...
    My tribute to you.
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sistah in the SPIRIT
    once again, i thank my FATHER
    for blessing me
    with the presence of you
    and all that you do
    to bring happiness
    to everyone you know

    Thank you
    for words that touch my heart
    adding to the start of this beautiful day
    a gentle ray that spells J O Y C E.
    of course
    i enjoy the flow of you
    and
    my wonderful sistah friend

    i've notice YOU, too.

    THANK YOU for this delicious peace.:)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw ****

    Now dat was madd cool!

    Reas
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce, u are hereby designated by me as the official haiku queen!
    Very nice!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis what i call brutha sistah love tyght flow my family
    keepin love a flow
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller: I'm glad you like. You are very welcome...quite naturally.

    Reason: Thanks for the read...appreciate it very much.

    Danilyn: Thanks for the read...Since you like Haiku...show some
    love at our new forum :) There's lot's to enjoy.
    Rich: Yes, this is a very unique family of poets on the net.
    Thanks for showing some love at the new Haiku forum. :)
     
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