Black Poetry : I've loved & lost it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Dec 19, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {Perhaps this is one of the worst poems i've ever written but i had to write it to get it out of my system. So if u like u like if u don't oh well these r just my thoughts.}


    Butterflies do happen
    cheeks do flush
    Knees do weaken
    It wasn't just a crush

    Smiling back at me
    But I was blind
    Looking for the Love
    I didn't have to find

    We were young
    But something new
    my heart beated
    That love was true

    Now standing alone
    I look at the past
    The love i once felt
    Had no chance
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice thoughts i enjoyed the read very much....some times we have to let it release....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we view love as hope and when it seem lost
    we feel done but i see a new shinning love star beyond
    the maze keep moving wit ya heart....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very emotive flow. There is nothing wrong with releasing your feelings, and you did so quite poetically. This may seem like this is forever, but it isn't. A new day shall come sis.
     
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